Opinions on these Love Poems I made.

Hey. Well. I made a few poems in the last few months for this girl that I last loved. broke up a week ago. anyways I’ve been trying to get Opinions on all the poems I created - but… hehe… guess I’m too shy to really ask anyone…
oh yea and… I’m new here - so Hey again.

so. here’s one of the poems I made.

Its called “Missing Here”

As my tears fall from my face, I cant fail to think that someone doesn’t miss me… But yet I know, I miss her even more.

Isn’t something missing here? I just don’t feel right when I’m by myself. My mind running wild with accusations - all thanks to another’s doubt. So many lies pushed through before, Is the truth finally something I’m allowed to have? Am I finally being graced with the truth? Or am I just being lied to yet again.

For months gone past, and still I know that my heart here is begging for salvation from its haunted past. Though another claims to love, how do I know it’s true… When other’s have said likewise and still managed to evade that truth.

So much is wrong… how have I become so irreparable? Walking with painful thoughts amongst my heart. Killing me slowly on the inside since the start. Forgive me, but I am not strong enough to watch…

How do I know if she truly misses me, When nothing is as it seems to me? Once before I thought she was true to me… but the truth was that she was only lying to me. One lie… and oh how my world is shattered now.

I’m trying to keep my emotions under control. But so much is still wrong with me that I’m forced to fail…

The love I feel is boundless, Released from under the shattered remains of my own heart. But for all the love that I’m allowing to go… I cant help but wonder - am I just being fooled once more?

I know what I can do to protect myself; breaking up and trying to stay loyal friends. It might be the best plan, but.. What if I’m wrong? What if she really does love me as much as I think she does…

She cheated on me… and the pain of the lie is what Hurts me the most… I just want her to be happy and let her happiness fill my day, but still I’m not able to be “okay”…

Something is missing here. But I don’t know what it possibly is. But its so clear to me… That… Something is still missing here…