need opinions on this poem and be honest not sure if I like it

No one understands All the pain she is in So alone she must stand Up against every sin

Turns her back on the world And gives into the pain Now a hurt little girl She isn’t the same

Carving her heart Through the skin on her arm She felt so apart she gave in to self-harm

It happened so fast They all wondered why Her life came to pass When she tried suicide

What a surprise they all said When they finally found A noose on her head Her feet above ground

She never knew it was wrong To commit such an act But she didn’t belong It was her own self-pact

She took her own being Couldn’t handle the ache Left the pain for your sake Gone, without foreseeing

Answer #1

Very powerful, as morbid as the subject matter is, it is a great poem. Well written, heart wrenching, good job.

Answer #2

I think is really good I like it =]

Answer #3

EXTREMELY powerful. Ought to be published…

Answer #4

whoa… thats great!

Answer #5

I love it :]

Answer #6

wow… I envy you. wow…

Answer #7

this is good :]

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