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need opinions on this poem and be honest not sure if I like it
No one understands All the pain she is in So alone she must stand Up against every sin
Turns her back on the world And gives into the pain Now a hurt little girl She isn’t the same
Carving her heart Through the skin on her arm She felt so apart she gave in to self-harm
It happened so fast They all wondered why Her life came to pass When she tried suicide
What a surprise they all said When they finally found A noose on her head Her feet above ground
She never knew it was wrong To commit such an act But she didn’t belong It was her own self-pact
She took her own being Couldn’t handle the ache Left the pain for your sake Gone, without foreseeing
Very powerful, as morbid as the subject matter is, it is a great poem. Well written, heart wrenching, good job.
I think is really good I like it =]
EXTREMELY powerful. Ought to be published…
whoa… thats great!
I love it :]
wow… I envy you. wow…
this is good :]
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