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What do you think of this poem?
one last time I find myself in you, fragile live we live is true. destroy 2 rebuild whats this life I live?
The end of the road is ahead, free my soul in yours so I can be at peace, the war in my head has told me im dead, and my mind is finally at ease.
save me from destruction, so I can treat you right, I am dying in this abduction, because you are perfect in my sight.
sad attempts have left me on the ground, with visions of hell, even after they kill, I am still here with you,not making a sound.
what have I become? these shadows have much 2 forgive, cast out by burning eyes of love, destined 2 kill, what is this life I live?
I wrote this please tell me wut you think..I dont have a name 4 it..I wrote this because this is how I fell im goin through a thing between me and my best friend I know jesus but when im with her I dont..
what have I become? these shadows have much 2 forgive, cast out by burning eyes of love, destined 2 kill, what is this life I live?
that part didn’t flow so well, it like lost is flow-ness
doesnt fit well, sorry
I agree
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