what do you think of my poem??

what do you think of my poem?? I just started to write occasionly please tell me if you hate it!!! CLOT I am this way and yet I’m not, My blood is slowly beginning to clot, And though I boil up inside, Some feelings I must seem to hide, The sizzle and crackle in my head, I soon turn upon me, And now I am dead.

Answer #1

it was really good, but I’d say the end needs a tad bit more work. but, I don’t know how to write so I’m probably not the best person to ask. good luck with your poem!!

Answer #2

I really like your poem jas good job

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