What do you think of this New poem? Its about Heartbreak?

Heart break sucks, No way to recover, This happens with the worst of luck.

Heart break is evil, Eating you up, Very brittle.

My heart like a puzzle, With many lost pieces, Which makes the rest just wasteful.

My eyes filled with tears, There’s nothing I can do now, They all came true, all of my fears.

I loved you once, I don’t know about now, Oh how I miss your presence.

Have fun with her, While I’m stuck here, Filled with anger.

As my tears become dryer, And I can see clearer, I see you only love her.

My heart filled with despair, My mind so confused, I really find this unfair.

Heart break is like fire, Guzzling everything up, Just like a vampire.

Heart break sucks, Everything so black, Causing so much havoc.

Answer #1

that was… AWESOME!

Answer #2

WOOT WOOT

5 star!

great job you got a gift for writing poem :)

that is so touching

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