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What do you think of my new poem?

Like a blade, your brilliance pierces through my heart, As you say, that you don’t love me. Like a blade your anger pierces to my mind. When you say you wont kiss me. We’ve been together for so long. But have we ever been as one? Look at all that we have been through. I’ve been here all along, battling with you Cant you see what I love you So like a blade, you cut me down to size … You cut me down… To size Why cant you see that I love you..

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Answer #1

I think that it is an amazing poem and that you should post more because im sure plenty of people would read it..I know I would.

and for the guy who said that writing poetry is corny and gay I bet you think that thee poem is awesome and your to afraid to let people know you like it or whats the point in posting anything

Answer #2

^ Nothing wrong with being ‘Corny’ haha, its sweet. Your expressing how you feel and tbh, you done a good job :) Im guessing you got hurt pretty bad :/. Wanna talk moree ? Funmail me :) & its a really good poem btw :)

Answer #3

I LOVEEE IT! =)

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