What do you think of this new poem?

I stumble through the darkness I just cant find the light. Ihear myself screaming, It echoes through the night. I feel my fingers shaking, Isee no other way. And as I stand here alone, I know im here to stay. The world hoes on around me. I know im truly lost, And in my self ill wander. Ill stop at my own cost. Ill just keep going, No one knows where. But it doesnt matter, Because no one really cares.

Pps- sorry about the grammer. Please be honest. And look at some of my other poems please!

Answer #1

no reason to bring religion into this…pisses me off lol anyway… I like it ! its so honest and the words flow well due to that it may be sad but who says thats a bad thing? keep writing :)

Answer #2

I like it… keep it up!

Answer #3

thats was good no matter what people say

Answer #4

its really good.

im trying to write a poem on doubt (I write a poem about every emotion) any ideas?

Answer #5

THAT REALLY SUCKS.

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