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What do you think this poem tells you?
Hi, it would be very helpful if you could be honest and tell me what you think this poem tells you.
You were my world You were everything between the heavens and earth
All these years you didn’t know I loved you Silence kept our distance, as always, I still craved you
I took my chance, I told you how I felt I felt my hearts regret, I lost it all within a glance
So immense, the oceans came crashing down, Why can’t I be the one you call your own
Don’t you bury me, don’t let me drown, not on my own, Not when I need you now
It burns to let go, the only way is to move forward The flame blows out, I’m thankful you did me a favour
You and me will never be, it will rain no more There are many treasures before me, what I now cherish tells me so
Thank you for all your posts.
Since the poem’s essence has already been give away, I will just judge accordingly. It gives great imagery. You used great detail, and I felt what you were trying to say in the poem. Magnificent… It really is. And the fact that you were able to place yourself in another’s shoes makes you even more exceptionable. Great job.
idk…i just think that it was a very beautiful poem…i guess u were with this guy and it didnt work out and u still love him even though the feelings werent mutual…u know u 2 will never be together but u thank him for all the things and memories that happened during that experience…=] if u wrote this then you are an amazing poet…=]
<3Paige
the poem’s nice. in my opinion, you were in loved w/ this guy who didn’t love you back. but you still love him. nice poem, really?
i think that the poem says that u were in luv w/ sum 1 who dint luv u, but u still want them sooo bad. but u accept the fact that they dont lyke u, at least not lyke dat
THANK YOU everybody for your posts, your guesses were pretty much right, though the real story behind the poem was about a girl i know who loved this guy she knew since she was 6 years old and ten years later decides to tell him and it all ends in tears because he never felt the same way about her.
Fortunately she has found someone and they have been together for three years and they are very happy, and i’m very happy for them too.
Your probably wondering why i wrote the poem as if it were about me? well i like to put myself in other peopes shoes so i can try to understand what their feeling, so i decided to put myself in her shoes and came up with this.
its good but i dont know
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