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Poem yet again..tell me what you think

Now she is

Now She is walking, Walking out on life Now She is running, Running from the strife

Now she is praying, Has been praying for a while Now she is faking, Faking a sweet smile

Now she is thinking, Thinking what to do Now she is planning, Planning a goodbye to you

Now she is crying, Crying all alone Now she is giving up, Giving up on her own

Now she is hurting, Hurting from the pain Now she is standing, Standing in the rain

Now she is yelling, Yelling for no reason Now she is changing, Changing like a season

Now she worthless, Worthless she is seeming Now she is losing, Losing all meaning

Now she leaving, Leaving us to ask why Now she has done it, Has done suicide

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Answer #1

Haha:D You wrote that yourself? I love it:)

Answer #2

Once again that’s really good. I prefer funny little simple rhyming poems, but that is still really good, you’ve depressed me for the night. (lol)

Answer #3

your a really good poet I wish I could ryt poem my fam say im good and a fortune teller told me ill be a poet when im older lol but yh good job keep doing poems you might get some where lol

Answer #4

wow really good!!! that is amazing, the best I’ve read in a while!!! keep it up

Answer #5

It’s awesome I will admit,it sounds like the girl was alone and felt like she had no meaning for life and the only way she could get out was putting herself to eternal sleep. Good job!

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