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What? I came Across an Old poem, here it is, what do you think?

I recently found this poem I wrote. I was 13 when I wrote it, so it’s old. Aha. It’s about my mother,enjoy! =P

Can’t Bare it! TM

I will slaughter that useless wXore I can’t fXXking take her bullshXt anymore I can invision myself stabbing her over and over, before it happens, I can see it in my head

She falls to the floor I continue to plunge the knife deeper, Again, Again long after she’s dead, On and on after she’s gone Again, Again

Abruptly I stop, Down I drop I fall to my knees, I look at what I’ve done, very pleased I can’t help, but grin

All her own lies, she believed She took herself over like a fXXking disease She was the same as a plague She corrupted everyone and everything that came her way

There’s this lengend, this myth Am I really psychotic? For the most part I am pretty sane, I just couldn’t bare to play her fXXking games.

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Answer #1

Uhm. It’s not a threat at all. And as I said in the question, it’s about my mother. It’s a poem. People use poetry to get out negative feelings rather than acting in a negative way, thanks for your input. XD

Answer #2

not a very good idea for posting this, you can get arrested. it’s a threat to someone and even though we can’t know who it was about, it’s still a threat. if any police finds this, you’d be arrested for planning to kill somebody.

Answer #3

Of course it’s not true. Aha. Cruel, though? Maybe.

Answer #4

THIS IS CRUEL! IS IT TRUE?

Answer #5

woahhh. scary, yet coool(:

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