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What do you think of this poem?

This is a poem that just came to me, I scribbled it down as quickly as I could. I’m not sure if I have got the placing right. It’s kind of pointless, and it’s not one of my best, for certain, but what do you think of it?

Layers of dust, Float through the air, Glimpsed only through The sparse sunlight, Filtering through the window Caked with grime. Over the years this house has stood, saying ‘no!’ to the weather. Finally, it is giving in. Dust to dust, ashes to ashes. Which leads us back where we started. Round and round, One continuous circle.

Thanks for reading, and hopefully commenting, Britz

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Answer #1

that was pretty good

Answer #2

thanks.. oh, and hollowtears, I have a lot of poems, most of them are posted on this site, but if you want to you can always ask me to show you some more. Britz

Answer #3

that was awesome and it has senimental value do have anymore poems and if so can I read them?

Answer #4

It’s sweet! I love it!

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