What Do You Think Of The Poem I Just Came Up With?

Heavenly clouds descend from the Heavens with a warm welcoming glow, The love and happiness in my heart continues to grow, While being welcomed by the one person I was anxious to meet and know.

Standing at the pearly gates are loved ones welcoming with loving arms, I know now, I will feel no more pain and safe from harm, For I know I am in the Kingdom of Heaven in the presence of God and in loved ones’ arms.

Please don’t grieve of my death, just only be happy for me, For I am and always will be happy because I am where I am supposed to be, Someday we will see each other again, to be loved, happy and free.

Death is the end of an old life and the begining of a new life. It’s like a portal to pass from one life into another.

Answer #1

shiiiiit!!!!…..thats deep!

Answer #2

dam ur poem is really good like she said its really deep and can help ppl who have lost a love one let them go

Answer #3

Youre very talented! This is very deep and I love it! You should go get this published asap!

Answer #4

agree=]

Answer #5

Very well written, i have to agree also very deep & very sad… I too write poems…welcome to the club!

Answer #6

i agree with you to this is a awsome!!! poem :D -K-

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