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I don’t write many love poems. I usually write depressing ones, if you check my questions area, you’ll see. but this is one I just wrote. what do you think? be honest.

“Your the one” it’s not over, your still waiting for a sincere apology, but words can not express how much you’ll ever mean to me. your the sunshine I look up to, your the one who dries my tears, your the one I want to be with for many, many years. your the one I hurt the most your the one who’s heart I broke, you didn’t think I’d listen to a single word you spoke. but babe, I heard it all from the inside, to the out, your the only one I hate to be without. now let’s go back a little, let’s pause.. can we rewind? how could I be so stupid, how could I be so blind? the biggest mistake I made was ever letting go I’m sorry for the past, I won’t stop, till you know. so please, just hear me out your the one I want to love and your the one… the ONLY one I’m EVER thinking of.

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Answer #1

I didn’t like much the first lines, but then I realized that your poem is really great, honestly. in my opinion, better then the previous ones

Answer #2

I LOVE IT. It relates to me so much. It´s like you sort of opened your heart and made it into this beautiful poem. I really liked the outline and how it sounds when you read it out loud. It has a rhythm to it, if you know what I mean :)

You really just put out all of these feelings and put them together into a poem that´s so strong in emotion but subtle at the same time ;)

Keep it UP!

Answer #3

I like it a lot! its pretty weird just because it explains exactly what I’m going through haha. I like it a lot. you are a really good writer.

Answer #4

aww thank you!!! I love writing about things other people can relate to! your opinion means a lot to me

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