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What do you think of this poem?
I can’t keep going on like this I hope that someday will bring bliss I can’t go on like this much longer I just wish that I was a lot stronger Why does my life have to be this way? I wish I could say that I was okay I’m tired of these thoughts in my head I just wish I knew what kind of life I led These feelings I keep inside These scars I can never hide, As I sit here and look at my arm Why did I have to start self-harm? I know that these scars will always be there I still remember the time when my arms were bare So don’t worry about me anymore I just wish I had to something to live for
whenlifegivesmelemons I doubt now would be the time to flaunt religion in someone’s faces. And who isn’t to say she hasn’t already.
It’s not bad. Revise it a bit, break it up into stanza’s perhaps. hope everything works out for you 1_~
I …LIKE IT =D
This is excellent, I suppose pain brings out beauty huh? I like the feeling I get from this, not to say that your self-harm makes me happy lol. Anyways this has good structure, you have potential!
it’s sad…I really hope youd on’t feel that way in real life. please go2god because he will help you!
but I like it. I think it needs a few like tweaks (some lines just don’t sound quite right) but overrall its really good! keep it up!
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