What do you think of this poem?

very deep, very real, very good. I loved it. you seem to have a natural flow with your work, thats a good thing to have, all I think you need is more knowledge word a wider vocabulary… but your on the right track dude, keep it up.

very nice poem… I appreciate you enjoyed mine. I won a contest last year with some stuff, im in 2 books. just armature contest but still its pretty cool to make it into a book. I like people’s honest opinion, what they like, and what they hate. im currently looking for a good site to post poetry on, but I have yet to find it.

well like the first one said, I wrote it all down very quickly, it took all of 10 mins and I was done. it just pours out of me, and yes cuddles, I have much much more but I dont post them. and thank you all for the feedback.

More or less except for spelling mistakes and shortfalls in cadence

wow that’s very touching and deep

I think it is really good. it is to similar to what my life is . it seems as if you didn’t have to much trouble writing it all down. like it was played over and over in your head and you just started writing it all and it seemed more like reality. ifyo have any more I would like to see them. I like it.