what do you think of these poems?

they are only short… wrote them while I was bored.

heres the key to understanding me I am not what you see when you look at me for to truly know me, you must first love me but when I look at you, love is not what I see

may the night to you bring the sweetest of dreams, of meadows, and grass, sprouting from the soil, bright green beams the sky is lit blue, as great tall trees loom above you. a swing-set sway, hardly moving, as we lay

Answer #1

I like them :) The first one is really nice. I really enjoy reading your work! You do write allot.. I cant do that.. I get huge writers-block if I write to much. Keep writing :)

Answer #2

love them

Answer #3

I just get headaches writing… so I drink wine… works for me

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