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what do you think of my sacrilegious poem?

yes, its atheist.

does god tremble does he frown, as I spit upon his crown, how much can you believe, is this your secret reprieve? your blind faith is all I see, it’s all bullshit cant you see you see less than even me.

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Answer #1

I thought the same thing as soloartist. It sounds like a childish tantrum, and how are you spitting on something you don’t believe in?

Answer #2

The last line is superfulous.

Also, if you dont believe then what crown are you spitting on?

Personally, I think it just seems angry and petty. If you want to write a poem about your beliefs then you can do it without degrading someone else’s. This isnt an atheist poem..its and anti god and religion poem. There is a difference.

Answer #3

does god tremble does he frown, as I spit upon his crown, how much can you believe, is this your secret reprieve? your blind faith is all I see, you see less than even me. there’s just no truth in falsity.

I added a line

Answer #4

I think its offensive to christian people

Answer #5

As a poem, the flow and structure is very well done…the message is a little harsh, however.

Answer #6

I FIND IT OFFENSIVE

Answer #7

I like it

Answer #8

I find it very offensive to my religion.. I’m sorry, but I don’t like it.

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