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What do you think of my poem, honestly?
A diary under the mattress drugs beneath the bed a body on the bedroom floor one gunshot to the head black clothes in the closet depressing pictures on the wall letters written to a special someone begging him to call a mother who was crying a dad who was out of state she was always fast asleep when her mother came home late all she wanted was acceptance for someone to say they tried each time people abandoned her another piece of her died the ambulance outside the house neighbors came to see what she had done she finally told the world how she felt with the sound of her daddy’s gun
does it matter whether its depressing or not? I think theyre better that way, rather than if it does become famous it being a poncy, sunshiney flower one. btw im a goth so yeah basically
to be honest it was appsalutelly ausome you should be a poet(h)
You’ve got talent! I loved it! A bit depressing though, don’t you think? Still, amazing!
Find another family to live with- the one you are in is going nowhere…
its not about me. its about my good friend who committed suicide.
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