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What do you think of my poem?
I’m just not sure so be honest please and thank you
Think of how wonder us it would be if I could right a poem of thee
It would be of the instruments you’ve played intelligence laid out for all to see instead of just me
It would be of manners so polite lovely like the sky at night
it would be of you and me us and we
Wait but could it be so lovely like a painting in front of me so perfect so right
It would be of thee and thy you and I could it be so perfectly
But wait could it be that I love you and you love me Think of us and we and what should be what shall be of you and me
It would be of you and me us and we What should I do? Tell you? How I feel of you should I stumble and fall again losing my friend
The answer to this would be the end
lovely :) any more?
It’s awesome, and it is beautiful. This is a touching poem, which can be seen as extremely deep, if you read between the lines. It is deep anyway, without reading between the lines. But here’s a tip. Spelling and punctuation help! Britz
no not right now sorry
Excellent! I think you’re a good poet. I would like to give you an advice Please check the spelling. Ok!!!
Bye seeUUU
I love it, I write poems too :)
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