wht do you think about my poem?

wht do you think about my poem..be honest please..

sitting here reminison and I don’t know wht 2 do I wnna go back 2 when it was just -me&you- when ud call me late at night when you didn’t hate me and we would never fight. as daysz pass me by-I’ve come to realize my love for you will never die. I still hve your voice recorded in my head;; ugh its killin me because I think I got easily mislead. your voice brightensz my day -bt now all I get from you is a simple “hey.” you don’t love me anymore you’ve made dis very clear. and now all I do is shed tear after tear. its been monthsz nearly a year.. I don’t understand why even tho I no your nt mine loosing you is my biggest fear.

Answer #1

I like it. One small tip though - get rid the slang.

Answer #2

wow!!! What inspiered this its gelreat!!! You souls try to make it a song some time!!!

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