What do you think of my poem

The stars are out, shining bright But the monster lurks, in the night

Wherever I look, the monster’s there Haunting my thoughts- his lair

There is no rest, no reprieve I can’t be happy, I only grieve

He taints my feelings, turns them blue I yearn for the light, all clear and new

I can’t escape it, his constant lies With not even my heart, as an allie

The internal battle rages on I feel myself drowning, i’m long too gone

Answer #1

wow it was amazing!!! I loved it! keep up the good work!

Answer #2

wow its beautiful and I totally get it

the feeling of someone or something just their waiting for you waiting to have you

I’ve written a bunch of poems if you want I can show you some

Answer #3

9 out of 10!SUPERB!

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