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what do you think of my poem???
rate it 1-10. or if you really hate it 0. just like to know what everyone thinks. thx everyone. ps.please dont clame it as your own.
Alone in the dark.
As the tears fall down my face. You tell me that I’ve been replaced As I fall to the ground. You turn around. As I gasp for air You start walking away. As I beg for you to stay. Your footsteps are your only answer As I stair at the ground. Your gone, Silence fills the air all around. As I sit all alone in the dark You’re final words truly made a mark
by yours truely
Katie.A.wow, strong poem, as I reread it, I found a sadistic little smirk curling around my lips, if you still write poetry why don’t you have a look at this website www.poem.org then go to the poetry forum. it’s a really nice place where poets help eachother out with their writing, on it I am Rachael, so if you join be sure to say hi :D
9!! great job!
that was real sad, but good poem =] and yeah alota people can relate to that.
- Sry =\
wow really good. im sure a lot of people can relate. =]
10
8!! I loved it. [; good job. :)
11.5 soz I know its over the limit… but the number says it all
thanks everyone this is a real confidence booster! =] I have a few more poems that ill put up lator on today. but really thank you. it helps knowing that people like my work
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