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What do you think of another peom I wrote?

I sit and think Think about all the time we had The really good moments The really bad moments Laughing so hard I cried Being so sad I cried Running around the table for you to catch me Running from you cause you hurt me Hiding my pain to support you Showing my pain for you to support me Watching sad movie you holding me while I cry Watching funny movie us laughing together You holding me while I slept so tightly in your arms Me holding you so tightly while you slept You cooking for me Me knowing it was all for me Knowing that there was so much to fight for Knowing that I didn’t fight enough to keep you around Knowing that we’ll never have that again Knowing that it all is just a memory now Knowing that I’m not your kit kat anymore kills me

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Answer #1

Yeah.They are very deep thought.I really love it. xXx (:

Answer #2

deep words. lots of meaning behind them. but then again, I feel for u. I know what that sort of thing feels like.

Answer #3

very good!!!

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