Another poem- What do you think?

Just wrote this today for a friend of mine.

It’s called “Singing.”

I’d not become a deer Were you not here And I’d I’d not run so fast There’s something in my chest I’ve been trying to rid myself of it but it’s just so danm trikky of a thing to do I think I might just justgive this up what a sillyendeavouer formetotake on icant defy a Chemical!

Don’t be ridiculous.

I’d not become a deer Were you not here.

So yeah, tell me what you think. The more detail the better.

Answer #1

I honestly don’t really understand it fully and then oet it seems so familaur to me. Keep writting never stop it is the most healing thing a person can do…sorry I can’t offer much more.

Answer #2

I honestly don’t really understand it fully and then oet it seems so familaur to me. Keep writting never stop it is the most healing thing a person can do…sorry I can’t offer much more.

Answer #3

I honestly don’t really understand it fully and then oet it seems so familaur to me. Keep writting never stop it is the most healing thing a person can do…sorry I can’t offer much more.

Answer #4

e heard you the first time darkwolf

Answer #5

I honestly don’t really understand it fully and then oet it seems so familaur to me. Keep writting never stop it is the most healing thing a person can do…sorry I can’t offer much more.

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