Another poem- what do you think?

Don’t touch me, don’t heal me, It only hurts more, Just deal with the pain, you’re the reason I’m sore, Leave me here lonely, I’ll find a firm hand, Your love will destroy me, don’t sift me like sand, Closely you search me, faster I run, The wind in my ears, I’m comfortably numb Play me a song, but you can’t touch me now, Only the ending rings louder than sound, Tortured dimensions falling away, I’m free from your cover, And here I shall stay.

I think it’s about my mum. I wrote it after a bad memory of her came up in a dream. I didn’t trust her.

Answer #1

That is really amazing. I’m a writer too. I also have a mom that lies and abandoned me so I understand how you feel.

Answer #2

she hasn’t done anything that bad. but when I was a tiny little kid I went down this water slide with her, and when we landed in the pool, she just let me sink for quite a while. I didn’t even remember untill the other night I dreamt of it and it all came rushing back

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