What Do You think about this poem?

Familiar Path TM

Now and again there is a path I walk down Sometimes there are people in crowds tightly packed Other times there isn’t anyone around

It’s interesting to see how people act Observe simple life situations- actions Each time I walk this path it’s the same- exact

From a bench I watch people’s interactions I see the same people infront of the bars Telling same stories- getting same reactions

Same guy on the corner playing guitar I spot a homeless man with a fist of change I wittness the same three guys smoking cigars

At the smoke shop- conversation they exchange We are all on the same path- isn’t it strange?

Answer #1

Nothing really. I was given a poetry assignment last year. We just had to write about a place we liked and I couldn’t think of a place exactly so I wrote about a path? aha

Answer #2

ok I’ll add you

Answer #3

what is it surpose to mean?

Answer #4

ok then want to hear 1 of my poems?

Answer #5

Of course! I LOVE poems!

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