What do you think about the poem 'the clock'?

The  clock

Before and after , now and then it’s going on and on Sixty times and sixty times Futures turning history , but it never stops Thats the story of nature’s clocks

A second before was a murdered woman in blood’s pool Now a baby is born , such joyfull tidings A sole tic changes entirely the world’s view Each second marks and ends some new beginings

Seconds of summer and autumn beginings Of tics of dawn and dusk’s tocs Springs comings and winter’s leavings But never a short stop did befall the clock

Volcanoes erupt and earthquakes But it always got what it takes Worlds destroyed and dreams shattered I’m yet to find if it ever did break .

Answer #1

Amazing. omg you are an extellent poet

Answer #2

Did you write it? If so its very very good. :) Its well written, and deep and emotional. Good one I like it.

Answer #3

tanx

Answer #4

yeah no problem i have published poetry and i think you should try to get urs published if u havent already

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