What do you think about my poem(: ?

Let it all loose. Just let it go. Let ir flow freely, And let it show. Your future is what lies ahead, And life will fall to shine again. Just live life fully And dont play too many games. Cause in the end, Life will put you to shame. So don’t try to be cool, Or just fit in. Be unique, And let life begin. Love who you want, And make life your own. Then god will bring you joy, And you will be known.

Dont steal my poem!! I spent my valuable time on writing this. Ill sue you for plagiarism if you do. Say its from megan w. Thanks(: Oh btw I wanna know what you think of itt

Answer #1

thanks :] yea I noticed that when my brother was readin itt :]] hahaha imma change that :] thanks soo much you guys. really is heartwarming to know people like it :]

Answer #2

it’s pretty good.. one error: 3rd line: ir-it** keep it up hun, soon you’ll be writing like a pro (: if you need any opinions or critique I’ll totally help you, I write a ton,. good luck (:

Answer #3

thats amazing lol :)

Answer #4

the rude comment wasnt asked for. thank you. I know it is spelled ir. get over it. no one is perfect,

Answer #5

I would at least spell-check it, before posting it…

Answer #6

no doubt! I will :] thanks

Answer #7

Whoo! I like it, I love it, I want some more of it!

I recently put up another one of my own. Check it out?

Answer #8

wow it’s great and I know a good poem when I read 1 cause I write well myself

Answer #9

I love that.It’s explaning life.and what it ay bring you. xXx (:

Answer #10

It would be a really good song

Answer #11

(: thanks! :]]]

Answer #12

Like it. :}

Answer #13

think so?!

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