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ok so I was bored and thought about this thing with a spider that had happened to me so I wrote a poem about it there isn’t a meaning behind it so yeah

“come down Mr.spider!” we shouted to him “we have you surrounded, you surely can’t win!” But that spider was stubborn, he wouldn’t be beat, he stayed on the ceiling where we couldn’t reach.

we attempted to bribe him with vacations and treats, but nothing was working, he was still on his feet

As we reached drastic measures we got out our guns, they were nerf guns of course, meant strictly for fun

He came down with his feet and his hands held up high, we removed the nerf dart that had stuck in his thigh

As it turned out he had tons of crimes! He was a murderer of Innocent flies, so the judge sentenced him to a saddening tie, execution it seems was the answer for him, for his 92 murders, so dreary and grim.

upon execution he had but a few words to say, as the shoe was bought down he screamed, and I heard the spiders last words of “Goodbye cruel, cruel world!”

“Farewell, Mr.spider.” I said with a shrug, as the shoe landed with a loud thud.

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Answer #1

I would never have thought to wirte something like that! I really like it. :)

Answer #2

that was awesome you should make a book of poems and publish it you could become rich $$$

Answer #3

I like it if I tried to make that up I couldnt lets see a spider on a tree will poop on me? lol I dont know good job :)

Answer #4

LOL! I am weird so I’ve been told but I got a kick out of it, its fun!

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