what do you think of THIS poem?

you are like fire, and I be the bush. I watch your fierce beauty as you burn me to bits. your words whispered with the harshest of words, and as smoke they rise, unheard. quickly you burn, from heart to mind. and leave me crippled, my life left behind…

and just so you know, im not emo and im not gonna kill myself. I just like to write.

Answer #1

thank you. it’s odd though. up till yesterday I had no poetic inspiration. it was all artistic inspiration. and so I drew. I guess when shit happens to you our brains try to use whatever media they have to send the message.

Answer #2

im 14. if you want to see the rest of my poems, www.that-random-blog.blogspot.com

Answer #3

That’s a beautiful poem it’s sweet I love it.

Answer #4

that’s so beautiful and impresive coming from a 14 year old

Answer #5

omg how old are you that was sooo sweet

Answer #6

its beautiful

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