what do you think of this poem?

Those days

I never thought love could hurt so much, but you did throw the last punch.

what you said sent me falling, forever crawling.

why am I forsaken now, forever rembering that simple vow.

did you forget about those days when you said “I love you”

sorry I cant really spell that good but just want to know what you think

Answer #1

wow. thats deep & simple at the same time. good job

Answer #2

woah I think thats really good =] kinda sad but really good! I definatly could not sit and think of somthing like that haha

Answer #3

Great poem :)

Answer #4

I like this remindes me of my ex..but hey were back together now..

Answer #5

I like it!

Answer #6

haha yea this poem is based off of what has happend in my life recently

Answer #7

amazing gift you have there

Answer #8

thats very good I can relate to this poem!! I liked it!!

Answer #9

Aww thats really good

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