What do you think of these poems?

1 —I would die to be size 0 , I would like to be cool ,

 I wanna be a hero ,,, not just a fool 


      At , school , I was always known as the weirdo , sitting in a cornor ,like a dog's stool , 




              Every body hated me ,im just an outcast , 



                    So I really really ,hate my life 

2–story of a kid : he hates his life - he is all alone , so at night he cries ,

His life is miserable that what he says , he is so fed up , he wishes he dies

  He is like a dark star that never lights , he hoping , that one day like a sun he shines
Answer #1

um

it was okay…

Answer #2

its kinda sad and depressing but if thats the theme you were going for then great! :D

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