Thinking of you-a poem

~Thinking of You~ spinning round and round I think of you most of all the way you hugged me the way you loved me but the biggest thing I remember is how you let me fall the way you hit me the way you told me things now I’m in a pit a pit of darkness at the point of no return the point were I want to burn leave behind the thought of you all your hugs and coos I’ll always remember you as that guy that split my heart in two…♥

Answer #1

It is just honest, constructive criticism. I’m trying to help you by poiniting out things that need some work. I could lie to you but I don’t like dishonesty. No offence intended.

Answer #2

well what ever I just wanna read some of the things you write…

Answer #3

why must you always give such harsh jerkish critisism?^

Answer #4

Alternates between very ordinary and very melodramatic.

Answer #5

thanks:)

Answer #6

:( sad. but its great. no offence but I think this is your best poem I’ve read because I like these kind of poems.

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