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Put it in the wrong place. My poem.

This one is about my school day lol I don’t know I was just thinking about what I did tat day and wrote this

When I wake up I dont want to go When I have to leave I want to stay

I want to stay in my dreams And figure out what everything means

I want to play in space and run on the moon I can still reality and know that its coming soon

Im still half aslep when my mom kisses me goodbye But when I enter the building im woken by manys ‘hi’s’

I start with 40 minutes of fun Then I get to do my homework which ways a ton

Then by a lot of numbers my mind is killed But after my hunger is filled

My favorite teacher then comes next then fun expeiraments with the best

My day kinda turns when I start cooking After that I stare at the clock and keep on looking

The best time of day is last Too bad it does way to fast

I pack up knowing tomorrow is a new day Then back to my covers I lay

Tell me what you think :]

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Answer #1

Its cute, but remember poems don’t ALWAYS have to rhyme :)

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