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I have to read this outloud tomorrow & I don’t want this to sound dumb or anything..so tell me what you think, please. I am a lover not a fighter. I wonder way too much of what people think of me. I hear ??? I want to do the best that I can. I am Kalea. I pretend like everything is absolutley fine, when I know sometimes it really isnt. I touch ??? I worry ??? I cry at the times I need to. I am just me. I understand that life can knock you down. I say the wrong things at the wrong times. I dream of me succeding in everything I do. I try hard to be the better person. I hope that someday I will see I am just me.

Where the ??? are, could you help me fill it in? I don’t know what to put!? Other than that, was it lame? Boring? Stupid? Good?

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Answer #1

I think that is a great poem! there is nothing that needs to be changed! did you write it , if you did I think you keep writing!and maybe start writing songs!

Answer #2

hi there,

its really good, but I just copied and pasted and took things out and added on some,,

even if you left it the original way its still good, up to you to do what you think, all the best and remember when you face your fears you become fearless,

you will be ok..

here is what I wrote instead,

I am a lover not a fighter. I often wonder what people think of me. I want to do the best that I can. I am Kalea. I often pretend that everything is absolutley fine, when I know that most of the times it really isnt.
I worry about the future, I cry at the times I need to. I am just me. I understand that life can knock you down. I say the wrong things at the wrong times. I dream of succeding in everything I do. I try hard to be the better person. I hope that someday I will see the dreams I visualise, I am just me.

Answer #3

I hear people trying to put me down and instead of sayin I touch I would say I love and the poem is pretty good

Answer #4

I agree sexy, I love just on its own is better than I touch.. and I hear people trying to put me down is xlnt!

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