what do yall think baout this poem??

If I said I’m sorry, would it be enough? If I said I loved you, would you even care? If I kissed you, would you kiss me back? If I gave you my heart, would you treasure it forever? If I placed myself back in your arms would you never let me go? Oh how I need you so! Don’t ever let me go! Because if you do I know what’s go going to happen… everything will fall apart slowly but surly .or has it already happened and neither of us know… that with out the other person….. our life’s will become known as the story of a boy and a girl who fell in love but never got to experience what it really was … even with all its little imperfections, it was good while it lasted, said the girl to the boy……. The boy stared blankly at a letter he had written to her. …………..is this all a play? We each had our parts and now its over, there no more room for imperfections in this world. Child you must leave! Take of your makeup and go home! The play is over; the curtains have closed, Along with all your hopes and dreams….scattered like dust on the stage. A tear fell from the girl’s cheek as she pick up the scattered pieces of her life off the stage. What’s wrong with me? Why do I feel so alone inside?… child, heavens not a place you go when you die, its that moment in life when you actually feel alive! And you’ve had that moment, a long time ago when you kissed the love of your life and butterflies filled your stomach, now go share this happiness with someone else! Its not your turn anymore… you lost it when you closed your eyes and for once in your life thought of someone else but yourself…. But that someone else didn’t care. So you were left alone cold, scared, shattered, and heartbroken. Its time to pick up your broken wings and fly! …….but as the girl put on her wings she jumps of a 30 story building and hoped that somehow her true love would save her like In the play… but the real world took advantage of her innocence, the innocence that brought her to her one and only love.. but times have changed the curtains are closed once more….. “How many times have I told you child! Don’t be blinded by love! .. The girl didn’t answer for her body lay lifeless on the pavement….. With a note in her hand. Which read? ……..I’ll wait as long as it takes, cause “true love” waits and I love you!! Blood covered the note making it hard to read……. As the body lay lifeless her love slipped away into the darkness and was lost forever………