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help me put this in a poem

I Wan’t To be There For You when your down! I want to make you feel special to see that sparkle in your eyes to love you and to care for you I want to be the one whos always dere no matter what the situation is Ill stand by you no matter what I want to make you feel worth the whole world that I wouldnt trade you in for anything if you was ever to be mine id sit there and stand der and defend you all the way and would never dare to think about turning my back on you id try my best to never let you done.

can anyone help me put this into a poem? And add stuff to it so it looks good :) SO I can like give it to this guy I’ve liked over a year for valentines :) Thanks :)

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Answer #1

Poetry is not supposed to be perfect and it does not have to ryhme. I dont see anything wrong with what you have written. If you are giving it to someone - it should come from your heart - not someone elses online.

Answer #2

I Wan’t To be There For You when your down! That sparkle in your eyes in enough for me to drown. I want to make you feel special, the way you should I wouldnt change a thing about you even if I could. I will always be there for you, Even if you’re not there for me too Ill stand by you no matter what
Forget you- I could not I will try my best to never let you down, When I’m with you its impossible to frown Because, simply, I love you.

thats what I got from your sentences hope it helped!

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