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Help me put this into a poem

Theres nothing more I can sayy there nothing more I can do. you just don’t want me. but I love you.. So what do I do? after all these year Noone gonna love you as much as I do I would of brought you the moon with all the money I had. You was worth more than any other in this world. you could of never got another me.. I cant beleive youve done this to me uve broken my heart once again.. and yet I still love you. Im in so much pain why can tyou just act like you care. atleast I could of regain to love another. my past isnt good. I thought you’d was the only one who could put it all right but who was I kidding, just just another player too.. just like all the rest I don’t even know why im stil here loving you. after al the hurt uve put me threw.. I guess this is what uve called true love. but it isnt healthy love.

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Answer #1

4 Verses, 5 lines each. Or mould it into a series of sonnets, old-fashioned and cool.

Answer #2

It is already and good job by the way.

Answer #3

Yeah thats what I was thinking.

Answer #4

Seems to me like it already is in a poem form.

-Megan

Answer #5

Nothin more to say, nothin more to do. Nothin more, not even if I love you. If I could, I’d have the moon at your heel. For no one could love you as I do, still.

So much you meant, so much I thought I did. I wish for anything else, for I beat… For you this heart, you broke. In my despair. Even if a lie, couldn’t you seem to care.

In you I hoped my dreaded past would heal. But I was just another heart to steal. My love so true to you, a grieve I take. How I wish you weren’t my loved mistake.

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