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Something new ~~~I’ve never felt this way before, it feels like I just entered an unknown door.

I think I’m losing my mind, I don’t know what to do. My heart is pounding as I get closer to you. My cheeks are burning as you touch my skin. My mind is elsewhere, I don’t know where to begin.

You pull me in and tilt my head. Oh how I can feel my face beaming red. I lean closer and close my eyes, I can then feel your soft lips pressed against mine.

The whole world stops except you and I. This is it, I must be in love. I feel like I’m flying in heaven up above.

Crazy

I think I’ve gone crazy, crazy for you! Hold on tight, this is all because of you. You broke my barriers, you came into my life. Now you have to deal with me, because I’m your wife!

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Answer #1

Cool. Seems to me you need some one to take some of the weight of your problems and support you. The very last verse/line kinda hints that. We all need some kind of support.

Answer #2

I agree I like it..

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