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A Teardrop

A tear drop is some thing to remember It’s a tear of joy A tear of sadness Or just a tear of pain It changes us In 1 way or another It sticks with us for life It some thing that we wont forget Its just and incredible feeling Makes us tremble and feel unsafe Brings back memories Some that we never want to feel But it’s a form of an expression Crying is just a characteristic that we all have Some just break out and let it out While others keep it in and let it out later A tear drop means so much And yet it’s such a very small thing A detail so small Yet so many notice it It’s a thing of pain Or maybe joy Or just pure sign of sadness or stress Either way a tear drop is a lot So when you have to cry Let it out Because it’s just too hard To keep that kind of a thing Wrapped inside of you So just let it out because a tear could mean so much To that one person you care about

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Answer #1

awww.. who is that one about??

Answer #2

Wow. I luv this. xx

Answer #3

WOW!!! OMG.. I’m crying right now.. that amazing.. keep up the good work dear!!! :)

we can be writing buddies!! kk

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