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Poem feedback?
each of these pieces of poems are seperated by stars
**changed the pattern of routine the black and white city scene the suits and ties the hidden lies they marched on through the great divide
true soldiers,city-molders they stay cool as the cities smolder
*Id rather let you take my place than move out of the way they say slow and steady wins the race but im last anyway
–and thats okay
*searching for a prayer with my good eye closed nothing but a jesus christ pose
[I hope no one gets mad over that that would be ridiculous anyway what do you think?]
dont worry,I appreciate it!
It’s quite boring, sorry… Im just telling the truth, don’t take that so much.
deffinately not boring.
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