I need feedback on my poem

When I use to live wit my auntie my uncle use to cheat on her and she never left him this is a poem I wrote long time ago tell me if you like it honest opinion

It takes a strong women

It takes strong woman To be in love with a man When she knows he’s not treating her right

It takes a strong woman To not confront her man When he didn’t come home last night

It takes a strong woman To close her eyes And not see what is in front of her face

It takes a strong woman To keep up her man’s lies When another woman is taking her place

It takes a strong woman To sacrifice her own happiness Just to make her house a home

It takes a strong woman To live with a cheating man Instead of living alone

Answer #1

That’s a very powerful poem- well done!

Answer #2

I like it, very meaningful :)

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