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A little feedback on my poem?
Please give me your input on my poem.
I know it is short but maybe that means more people will read it.
Right now I am calling it, (don’t believe the curious george stories)
Ok, here goes:
A monkey in tree As wry as can be A tug on his tail A monkey bit me
lol (^__^)
very cute lol
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