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Belong: What’s the point of living life when the ones you love are better off without you? There love only to be mutual. Your exsistance just to be a minor adjustment in their lives. Having the knowlege that those wonderful words, never really came from the heart. Understanding your placement in there lives, dropped down and 6 feet under. Always and forever to never be remembered To live a life in the darkness of your own insanity.p And yet no one dares to care. Where’s the sense of belonging? Where’s that feeling of knowing your right where yu want to be? Where you need to be? Does such beautiful things exsist? Or is this just another illusion my untamed mind had come upon? If I had 3 wishes the choices would be simple.

To experience love
To be someone And my last ultimite wish?
To be saved … from myself

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Answer #1

i really like it but for some reason i wouldnt call it a poem

Answer #2

Maybe a short story? Lol And thanks :)

Answer #3

wow….it’s so intense..like so…true….

Answer #4

very good. theres this sight called LuLu poetry u can enter and win cash prizes. u should join.

Answer #5

Thanks :)

Answer #6

Really? Cool, thanks :)

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