More Art, Writing & Literature Questions

what do you think of my poem?

hero time bomb I leave my home and the ones I love, To protect them and their home, I must hide my sorrow and show only pride, In my strong confident stride.

I’m a turtle always shielding my self, People see a hero in me, But inside I’m exhausted and scared, And I don’t think it can be repaired.

I’m as sneaky as a walking stick, Creeping by looking completely fine, No one can see what I hide, This deadly time bomb on the inside.

I’m like a wolf crying for the moon, But instead I cry for you, And the safe home life I miss, Hoping ill get to give another kiss.

I’m sorry I’m not there for you, I’m sad that I left, But I have to do my duty, To protect my countries beauty.

And if I don’t see you again, I’m sorry for this bomb inside my heart, If I die please know only this, I did it for you and only you I will miss.

Become an Expert →

Answer #1

It sounds very nice and creative. Be proud of your imagination and don’t let anyine discourage you. The poem itself is very visual and understanding. I like it.

Answer #2

anyone*

Answer #3

thankies ^_^

More Like This

I want to leave a poem - 1 Answers
I want to leave a poem for people to , tell me what they think
What do you think of my poem? - 1 Answers
I had to right it for English class, I enjoy writing it now lol. This is deep, something you want to keep, you would even go ...
What do you think of my new poem? - 4 Answers
I hope that one day you will see it my way. Till that day, you see it the unclear way For love is hard to give without taking...
Do you think that Lenore from the poem "Lenore" is the same Lenore from The Raven? - 1 Answers
I mean both were written by Edgar Allan Poe, but i wonder if he means about the same girl or not or its just a coincidence. W...
What do ya think about this poem? - 1 Answers
'when I am in his arms im in heaven When I lean into his kiss nothing else matters When I look into his eyes every thing is p...
What do you think of this poem? - 5 Answers
I loved her I cared for her she was my true love she was everything to me evedentaly I was nothing to her she used me a...
What do you think? I wrote a poem! - 4 Answers
I made up a poem, tell me what you think: Willow tree, willow tree why are you so sad? She is no longer sitting on your bran...
What do you think of this poem good or no? - 4 Answers
Before I put the poem down I would like to say. It not weird for a boy to make a poem ( I think :d). And this is the first on...
What you think of my new poem? - 5 Answers
I promised I would always love you , you promised you would always love me I promised I would never let go , you promised you...
what do you think of my poem?? - 2 Answers
what do you think of my poem?? I just started to write occasionly please tell me if you hate it!!! CLOT I am this way and yet...

Ask an advisor one-on-one!

what do you think of my poem?

Poems Please

Diamond Nail Supplies

KitabDeal.com

Shopnobilap

Kathi Sohn's Self-Help Resour...