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New Poem, any insight?
It was the magic of the moment, For anyone who stepped up to own it It was the light in his eyes, It was sweet comprimise It was her delacate taste It was the blood running down her face They say good things come to those who wait But all she got was a night of fear and hate She was alone and scared But when she reached out for help, no one was there No one dared to care To pull her out of this consuming nightmare So I swore to myself one day I would make them pay For throwing me away And watching me drift away Towards the limbo where the forgotten play In this hell, where I’m gagged and boud WHAT DO I DO NOW? I can’t survive In this Infected Hive of lies Where everyone dies Because there’s nothing left inside Exept for a faded memory Of her and myself sitting by the sea. We where one and happy We will break free
Love it and nice
OMG that was really well written you write like a pro
‘Awesome’ doesn’t really fit, so I’ll say it was nice…
amazing job keep writing xD
That was realy good! I loved it.. keep writing!!!
thank you very much! my insperation>>>
you are talented. don’t ever stop writing. I too loved it:)
I loved it! your great writer
aww thanx!!
kick as*
oooh kamaka, the pic is so cute!!!
your writting is amazing… I for got to coment your deviantart >_>
omg I love it
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