New Poem, comment please?

Chewing gum and paper bags wherever I go Someday, gunna take it slow Patience comes to the pretty Concentration comes to them...

(my boyfriends name here), I love you oh so very much, my heart stops everytime we touch, I wish time would freeze, so you co...

It hasn't got a name, you can come up with one for it if you like. Each time I cry, I hear all the angels laughs, and all th...

"I promise, one day, I'll make them all proud." I want to fall to sleep tonight, My mind to just switch off without a fight....

It's a little weird but whatever. Before anyone reads this I'd like to thank everyone who has read and commented on my previo...

so long I've been waiting for tomorrow to be the day. Night after night praying this will be it, it'll all be okay Growing im...

'Just Save Me.' I love you, I hate you! Its nothing but waste. oh, why should I care? Its my body, its my life, I dont n...

*I Think You're Divine* Control seems so far away from me. Control is a need, control is a fantasy. I can't shut you up, I c...

When I awake, in morning's gentle light, you are the birds, beginning to take flight. In those fuzzy-edged moments before the...

The sun sets, Casting distorted beats, Of red and orange, ??? The nite shines through, Embracing the subtle hints of darknes...