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See the color of rain, feel the sting of pain. See the color of Fire, know the passions of a liar. See the color of wind,...

It hasn't got a name, you can come up with one for it if you like. Each time I cry, I hear all the angels laughs, and all th...

"I promise, one day, I'll make them all proud." I want to fall to sleep tonight, My mind to just switch off without a fight....

It's a little weird but whatever. Before anyone reads this I'd like to thank everyone who has read and commented on my previo...

'Just Save Me.' I love you, I hate you! Its nothing but waste. oh, why should I care? Its my body, its my life, I dont n...

*I Think You're Divine* Control seems so far away from me. Control is a need, control is a fantasy. I can't shut you up, I c...

When I awake, in morning's gentle light, you are the birds, beginning to take flight. In those fuzzy-edged moments before the...

so long I've been waiting for tomorrow to be the day. Night after night praying this will be it, it'll all be okay Growing im...

I need it for school and I cant freaking write one so please someone help

How one can be ever so near yet a mystery I could never tell How I can be acquainted to thee And fail to tell your desires ...