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My poem..what do you think?
Darkness
I’ll close my eyes and shut all the world out. They will never know where I am or why I left them. Nor will they care that I’m gone and lost in a lonely empty dream. For they will never know what goes on in my head, or why my heart has turned such a dark shade of black, so cold and carless. May I linger in my thoughts while others search? or is that wrong of me? to keep them shut out, locked out. I long to be out of this dark room behind my eyelids. Yet I fear the world its self. I will never allow myself to leave my safe lifeless room. But, I know I have to face the world sometime head on at full speed.
Yeah- nice.. hah it fits the title if you ask me lol I like it- your a pro already for your age I make some too- but im not sure if im good as you =]
I agree I don’t think I’m that good…
that was really good it has a great meaning behind it and its written very well
Thank you! I really wasn’t expecting that. :D
Wow thats deep!:) I love it!
That’s pretty cool. I like it!
I actually love this.
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