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Need Your Opinion ( love poem )
my girlfriend is really down at the moment and I wanted to do something to cheer her up. so I spent about an hour to make the perfect poem for her. please tell me truthfully what you think as I need to know if its good or not. will it cheer her up ?
So many words can describe how I feel, Cause to me baby you are just so unreal. In a good way I speak of my feelings for you, How amelia you are the one I luv so true.
You are the one who I always think, I even see your face everytime I blink. I really don’t know why am I acting like this, All I know is that it is you that I miss.
When I think about you, my eyes seemed to glow, When I dream of you, I hoped for no tomorrow. To be with you right now is what I’ve wished, Cause it really is you that I have always missed.
My thoughts, my dreams I never thought they would come true. Days went by And I was still dreaming of you.
Your eyes, your heart, your touch I want you to know you mean so much. Your on my mind 24/7 When Im with you I feel like Im in heaven.
Babe you are my one true love, You fly above me like a sweet little dove, I hope you find it in your heart, To never make our relationship part.
The last thing I have to spread, Is how I cant get you out my head, All my life I’ve wanted your touch, And baby do I love you soo much x x
AMELIA x :)
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Bed Of Flowers
I found myself in a bed of flowers looking up towards the sky I laid there inhaling the sweet fragrances of the flowers and thinking of you and I.
the fragrances tickled my nostrils and the memories flooded back in thinking of all the joys we had and all the things we did.
every feature of your face the color of your eyes the way your hair fell upon your shoulders and how you could hypnotize.
I felt your arms around me the tenderness of your embrace your soft tender kisses kissing my neck kissing my face taking me back to another world, another time another place.
you had captured my heart with all that I saw and in my heart live there now and forever more.
I smell the fragrance of your body and it fills me with delight. I feel your presence near me although you’re not in sight.
all my five senses are reaching out to you but you’re not there and I don’t know what to do.
so I’ll lie in this bed of flowers until you finally arrive and in my heart I know that our hearts will both entwine.
louis rams
ohhh my gosh that is sooo sweeet!!! she will love it FOR SUREE!!! (I mean I would!!! lol) so yes totally awesome and sweet and just lovely!!! ahhh…so sweet (:
It is sooo sweet! She’ll love it, I think any girl would, I love it!
its sweet^^
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